[7Nanovirus]

Hey this song is the following of "heart failure" that i posted before. It's about thoughts that the protagonist is having after breaking up with his partner.

Coma :

Feeling so weak, i need to sleep
Finally some rest, i dreamed of it
No more worry and secrets to keep
I feel free now, free to live

But why can't i dream ?
Why can't i fantasize ?
Why can't i hope ?
Why do i regret everything...

I'm in a coma, watching my mistakes
Remembering the time it takes
To live a life with someone who fakes
A love and gives you heartaches

Lost in my thoughts, i can't find my way
Is it my soul talking to me ?
Am i being judged, am i insane ?
Is it god absolving me ?

But why can't i wake up ?
Why can't i ask anything ?
Why can't i have answers ?
Why can't i die...

 I'm in a coma, suffering forever
Paralized and hurt by a mind fever
It certainly is the worst pain ever
To burn in an eternal fire



I hope you'll like it, give me your advice !

[den]

wow, very deep, I don't think you could change a word, be very interested to hear this.

[mickeytwonames]

Listeners love a chorus they can rely on
the one I like is

I'm in a coma, watching my mistakes
Remembering the time it takes
To live a life with someone who fakes
A love and gives you heartaches

[physicalscotch]

I'm in a coma, suffering forever
Paralized and hurt by a mind fever
It certainly is the worst pain ever
To burn in an eternal fire

I can relate to this so much! My absolute favorite verse that I have seen on this forum. For me it is dark and beautiful. Just the way I like it.

Best,
Jacob