Hi Guys,
I was wondering what you think about my pop song ''Your Love Is Plastic''. It has been critized a bit for its lyrics. What parts are good and which lines would you change? Always grateful for feedback. Here are the lyrics:
Your Love is Plastic
(verse)
have you always been so ferocious?
or was i tricked by fake emotions?
get out of my sight,
want you out of my mind
aurevoir! sans moi! ( french)
has my mind always been that flexible
I was blind and you were just terrible
but now I'm glad to see the back of you
au revoir, casse toi!
(Prechorus)
And now you recognize I'm blessing in disguise?
Why did you have add fuel to the fire ?
stay where you are, don't you dare turn around
don't you dare turn around now!
(Chorus)
Cause your love
is plastic, I don't want to stay
I'm going home
I didn't come to ertertain
you were wrong
when you said our love is gold
cause plastic's not useful
Who is the one who has to fall_
(Verse)
Have you ever thought about things that went wrong?
its getting tough and you're hiding behind walls
let your mind speak cause there's no repeat
its over, o-over
(Prechorus)
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
Disappointment hurts and lets
my feelings become such a mess
When I'm mad I don't know myself
don't know myself..
(Chorus)