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The Cabin - Acoustic Pop
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Wolfini
Solo Gig
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Re: The Cabin - Acoustic Pop
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Reply #15 on:
November 25, 2015, 08:42:39 PM »
Thanks Digger and Adam!
@Digger: good to hear you liked the synths, too.
@Adam: yes, I have problems with vocal expressions...
But I am glad you still liked it.
I just uploaded a new version where I tried to fix the shaker.
Bye Wolfi
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Tommy Blixt
Open Mic
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Re: The Cabin - Acoustic Pop
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Reply #16 on:
November 26, 2015, 11:14:17 PM »
Nice songwriting! I could see this tune in a emotional scene in a movie or similar. The guitar sounds really good in the mix, but the shaker is a bit out of sync at some places.
I like this!
With love
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Boydie
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Re: The Cabin - Acoustic Pop
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November 28, 2015, 04:42:33 PM »
I liked the shaker - but I assume I am listening to the "fixed" version
The acoustic guitar tone is nice a "woody" and I liked the mix between them and the swirling synths
I agree about changing the string sound to more of an organ or pad
I also agree with pruning it down a little
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