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New Song > Hold My Breath
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1stBaseEnt
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New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 12:11:36 AM »
Hi
This is a song called Hold My Breath it was written by our team over a period of 2 months. We have put a lot of hard work and effort in to it. Please leave your Honest and true COMMENTS below as they will help with the creation of something amazing
. We review all comments everyday so we will take them on board.
Here it is :
https://soundcloud.com/1st-base-productions/hold-my-breath-written-by-nick-chikore-and-prod-by-nashe
Please feel free to listen to our other songs on Soundcloud, Follow us, Like and share
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Thanks guys Enjoy
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PaulAds
Stadium Tour
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Haemorrhaging Enthusiasm
Re: New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 12:15:11 AM »
Keep holding
Sorry...I got sidetracked - hope I'm not too late!
That girl's a good singer...not really my cup of tea...but seemed to be very well done.
Feel free to have a browse around the forum
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Tiago.Mendes.Rodrigues
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Re: New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 10:51:02 AM »
nice one there's something strange with the voice sound...
but maybe some Eq could fix it anyway it a great job
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Rachel
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Re: New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 03:19:57 PM »
Brilliant Song, i love it right from the start. It sounds honest n real to me. I really can imagine hearing it on the radio. but as Tiago says: there's something strange in the voice sound...
anyway great work!
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pompeyjazz
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pompeyjazz
Re: New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 04:37:37 PM »
A well put together and produced song. Think the vocals are very good. Not particularly my favourite genre bur a good song nevertheless.
See what you think about some of the other forum members songs. There's a great varied selection on here. I'm sure your critique will be appreciated
John
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1stBaseEnt
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Re: New Song > Hold My Breath
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November 06, 2015, 07:18:15 PM »
Thanks for the amazing feed back guys its been helpful, back to the studio to rework and see what can be done to perfect the vocals.
THANKS Again guys
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