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Blow Up (unfinished)

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tracyl

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« on: October 28, 2015, 12:07:16 PM »
I'm bout to blow up
Light up the bomb
This is my show now
Fire up the song
I'm bout to blow up
Bring out the lights
We bout to blow up
Light up the sky

-We been dreaming of this one night
This the reason why kids fight
The big life and fast lights
Tight whips and dollar signs
I never been that close
So i'm gon' raise a toast
with whatever's in my cup, cause i ain't about to stop
My talent's loaded up, so bitch I'm blowin' up

I'm bout to blow up
Light up the bomb
This is my show now
Fire up the song
I'm bout to blow up
Bring out the lights
We bout to blow up
Light up the sky

I kept it all inside, cause I really had no pride
They been searching for me, now I guess they're gonna find
I've been hearing greatness, now it's time to create mine
And open up your eyes cause first off you were blind
And now I spend the time, I dreamed of all of it
I can't believe it's now with this crowd it's happening

Paulski

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« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2015, 04:05:34 PM »
Hi Tracy

I guess this is for EDM?
Super chorus!
I wasn't keen on the "bitch" term but maybe that's OK in EDM?

Paul

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« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2015, 01:20:43 AM »
great lyrics, nice storyline that builds, cant wait to hear this.

Arkwright

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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2015, 10:28:30 AM »
Not usually my kind of thing but this is a really punchy number that is well constructed.

The chorus is particularly strong and I can hear it being belted out on the dance floor.

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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2015, 10:46:46 AM »
Got a rap-battle vibe going on here too perhaps?
I thought it flowed really well.
The last section obviously contrasts with its longer lines so I'd be interested to hear your take on that and whether and how the backing also changes.
Some great hip-hop style rhymes here!

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« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2015, 01:10:07 PM »
I really enjoyed the chorus. I agree, I could imagine this in a EDM track. Well done.