[Wolfini]

Great idea masterfully realized. Love it!

That voice even seemed to change its pitch, fitting the music did you do that or did it happen like that?

Congratulations! Bye Wolfi

[PaulAds]

Thanks, Wolfini

It's pretty much just the way it came out...I had to change a bit here and there, edit it and format some parts differently (paragraphs, sentences, etc) but I'm glad you liked it

[Boydie]

This is AWESOME!

"Parody" songs like this only really "work" (IMHO) when the music is top notch - and this works brilliantly

The drums fit perfectly so really well done on using the loops here - it really did feel like a drum part specifically played for this song, great job

I really liked the mix and processing of the guitars - lovely and "jangly" but never harsh

I would have probably mixed the strummy electric a little lower

My only (really nitty) critique would be the low end as I think the kick and bass and sharing frequencies as the bass guitar sounds a little "weak" and I can hardly hear the the kick drum

If you notch out some complimentary frequencies in each I think it would transform the track

The lyrics and "melody" are really clever and the delivery is sublime

I think you may have found your "style"!!!!!

Loved it!