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<Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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igg
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #15 on:
October 29, 2015, 10:49:31 PM »
Paul,
I did a little research for you....check this out....maybe it could work..
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MartiMedia
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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October 30, 2015, 12:08:35 AM »
Wow this is really creative! Cool!
Great instrumental and really original idea! Love the lyrics,
gives me the image of somebody that's feeling alone and only
has a computer to interact with the world.
Well done man!
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PaulAds
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #17 on:
October 30, 2015, 09:20:13 AM »
Cheers Kevin!
and also MartiMedia
and thanks for that, Igg...i shall investigate!
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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October 31, 2015, 10:56:36 AM »
Hey Paul
Nuts, but it works well. Kind of updated Bonzo Dogs.
Lyric is great and the backing is nice. Some great lines...maybe some crazy backing vox might add something. Some of those phrases might sound nice with some delicate harmonies to contrast with the spoken bit....
Nicely done!
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Jamie
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #19 on:
October 31, 2015, 12:11:17 PM »
Hi, very creative, love the lyric it's clever. Great idea well realised!
Nice one.
Cheers
Jamie
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Frenchy
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #20 on:
October 31, 2015, 04:04:38 PM »
Hey Paul,
I love this, it is so original, quirky and fun.
Excellent lyrics too ! 3 listens already..
Regards,
Lee
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #21 on:
October 31, 2015, 05:58:41 PM »
Thanks VC, Jamie and Lee for the kind words
I just had an email from my local BBC Introducing to say they'll be playing the song tonight sometime after 8pm...big thanks for a top tip from Ben (doodles) about trying that route.
I'm off now to cobble together a video from Igg's suggestion
nowt flash...but i tried.
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Frenchy
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October 31, 2015, 07:17:54 PM »
this could go viral !
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igg
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Reply #23 on:
October 31, 2015, 07:39:48 PM »
Good Work, Paul!!!!!
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Paulski
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #24 on:
November 01, 2015, 12:15:53 AM »
Hi Paul
Haha - love a good novelty song and this one was muchos fun!
Not much to sugg - totally works.
Maybe some female BG "ooos'" later in the song and change parallel poet to USB port?
Very creative!
Paul
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #25 on:
November 01, 2015, 09:54:53 AM »
Hi Paul,
Love the lyrics and delivery.
The music seemed almost irrelevant, yet fit well with the style of the song.
Congratulations on the airplay.
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olivergearing
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #26 on:
November 01, 2015, 10:47:14 PM »
Great song, great idea.
Kinda reminds me of William Shatner's versions of songs where he talks the lyrics.
Is this the same voice a syri? So basically you've just released a song by Syri?
That is totally awesome...
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November 01, 2015, 11:09:50 PM »
Thanks, Paul and Digger
Cheers, Oliver...I think it's the same voice they use for "Siri" and the narrator function in MacOS's "textedit" app. I love how it tries to sound human...but can't. It seemed perfect for this...
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November 01, 2015, 11:38:51 PM »
This HAS to be SOTM. Oops sorry I'm canvassing
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Re: <Control Alt Delete> Warning:Contains Novelty Item
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Reply #29 on:
November 02, 2015, 08:34:15 AM »
Hi,
Very clever stuff. Excellent entertainment, had me
smiling all the way through
Great way to start my day.....thanks
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