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"Sometimes" (rough demo)

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MartinG

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« on: October 18, 2015, 06:54:09 PM »
Hello,

I´ve been away for a while. Last year in December and January I was trying to focuss on my writing and was looking for a collaborator. My mistake was, i did it in three our four boards (ok let´s say five or six) and I got a huge amount of replies.... so I´ve been away :(.

Because every once in a while, I get in the mood and start to Play... like right now...

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13234388

"Sometimes" (the very last song) - Demo

Sometimes I feel lonely
Then I have to tell myself
I love you
How I wish I had somebody I could say it to

The most precious things we own
I our lives got shattered
and broken
And then mended back together
And then mended back together

(Interlude)

Sometimes I feel a bit scared
Of facing this life alone
All the way
I just wonder, will you ever find me some day

Then I look at my generation
We were once young but the time is
going on
Those who were about our age they are almost gone
Those who were about our age they are almost gone

Sometimes I feel so lonely
Then I want to tell somebody
I love you
And you wouldn´t break my heart for another time
You would mend it back together
Yes you would mend it back together

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« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2015, 10:32:29 PM »
think the intro is a few seconds too long, didn't like the la la chorus at all, it so dated the song. think this song would suit a girl singer more, on the plus side its a great tune, great backing and all the makings of one of those songs you never tire of hearing