Hi guys - first off let me thank you for the warm welcome you've given this lyric - grim as it is
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It has come in last place in a contest on another forum out of 12 lyrics so I was getting worried about it
But obviously you ppl have more taste
@igg
Thanks for the kind remarks. This is meant to be ugly territory for most readers. I would hope that "unsettling" would be a normal reaction.
@adamfarr
Hi Adam - yes execution - but meant to be unclear as to
who is doing the executing. Rap ?? Seriously hadn't considered that. Thanks for commenting!
@johnlondon
Hi John and thx for reading/commenting. Those lines are supposed to be exclamatory not a rhetorical question but I can see it could be confusing. There is no intended pun in the bridge.. do you mean "straight"? I don't think of pedophiles being gay... maybe I'll change it to "right" to avoid that if that's what you meant..
@Vintage54
Thanks for the kind words Vintage. It's a bit unkind of me to put readers through the thoughts here - maybe that's why it finished at the bottom. But I couldn't NOT write it down once it came to me.
@lillypilly
that is where creeps lurk
Amen to that lillypilly - so we must go there too to deal with them.
@Doodles
Thanks doodles. Not sure I'm brave enough to record this - but if I do it has to be angry music whatever that means.
@Neil C
Cheers Neil - yeah spoken might work. Where's Pat F. when you need him
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