[Paulski]

lyrics look very good, looks like they have a good flow and pace, if that makes any sense

the only thing i find difficult is to understand that line: i am wrappin my heart in your love

sounds good, but sounds a bit difficult to me  But hey, i am Dutch 

but cool lyrics once again, Paulski

Hi Dutchbeat. Yeah - there are some lyrics in this that are going to be a challenge - we'll see how it goes! Thanks for the positive comments!
Paul

[Gwyneth Rose]

Hi guys
This one is a bit bluesy. I have some music that fits this.
Any advice/comments are welcome
thx
Paul

Wrappin' My Heart in your Love
Copyright © 2014 Tennyson Road Music

{ch}
I'm wrappin' my heart in your love
It's breakin' apart, but I'm tapin' it up
The pain is too sharp,
So I'm wrappin' my heart in your love

{vs}
I promised myself I'd never allow
A lover to come too close to my soul
But I'm breakin' that vow
And I'm wrappin' my heart in your love

I'm wrappin' my heart in your love
It's breakin' apart, but I'm tapin' it shut
This pain is too sharp,
So I'm wrappin' my heart in your love

{br}
Cold winters - they blow
Dark nights take their toll
But your warmth helps me stay
In the light of the day

My love was all gone, my heart was a stone
Alone on the ground, when you came around
So cold and so rough
But you covered me up with your love

{solo}

I'm wrappin' my heart in your love
It's breakin' apart, but I'm changin' my luck
This pain is too hard,
So I'm wrappin' my heart in your love

This pain is too much,
So I'm wrappin' my heart in your love

Hi P

As usual excellent write with very powerful emotive imagery. You are so talented my friend.

Cheers
G

[Paulski]

Hi P

As usual excellent write with very powerful emotive imagery. You are so talented my friend.

Cheers
G

Hi Gwyneth
Thanks for the +tive comments. I'm not 100% happy with this one yet though. I'd like to focus more on the metaphor of "wrapping a gift or parcel" in the verses so they support the chorus better. But glad to hear I'm on the right track...
Best
Paul