I've tried to write a commercially viable song for a female artist (in fact it's not gender specific but I prefer it for a female!) that wasn't my usual 'bubblegum' Pop. I've tried to blend a Pop feel with singer songwriter feel and come up with something like Ellie Gouldings early stuff (The Writer etc) or Emelie Sande (Next to me). Much harder trying to write something with depth than putting together few buzz words for bubblegum Pop and I'm not sure if I missed the mark or if I'm even close to it!
Anyway the song is a reverse of the 'it's not you, it's me' and I thought wouldn't it be great to reverse that odious line and show how good another person can make us feel when in love
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All constructive feedback welcome!
Baby it’s you (©Hearty 2013)
V1
There’s only one person who lifts me up, lifts me up,
So high I can’t fall,
That’s the person who makes me feel, makes me feel,
Ten thousand feet tall,
No mountain too high I can’t climb, no river too dry I can’t swim
PC
They make me see,
The good in me,
Make me believe,
There’s good in me
C
B-b-baby it’s you,
Devil on my shoulder making me bolder,
Twinkle in my eye when I start to fly,
B-b-baby it’s you,
A voice that says today is your day,
Don’t let anything stand in your way,
Baby, baby it’s you
V2
I know they can take me away, take me away,
Flying above the clouds,
No matter what they’ll keep me safe, keep me safe,
From the baying crowd
Now they are taking me higher, taking me higher,
Than I’ve ever been
PC
Now I can see,
The good in me,
Now I believe,
There’s good in me
C
B-b-baby it’s you,
Devil on my shoulder making me bolder,
Twinkle in my eye when I start to fly,
B-b-baby it’s you,
A voice that says today is your day,
Don’t let anything stand in your way,
Baby, baby it’s you
B
Baby it’s not me,
Oh baby it’s you,
That makes me feel this way,
You make me feel this way,
You make me feel this way
C
B-b-baby it’s you,
Devil on my shoulder making me bolder,
Twinkle in my eye when I start to fly,
B-b-baby it’s you,
A voice that says today is your day,
Don’t let anything stand in your way,
Baby, baby it’s you