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Deadbeat lover

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« on: January 18, 2013, 11:40:37 PM »
Another of my Scottish heartland epics
Hope you enjoy


Deadbeat lover

Stubby can of tennants
fill the train on a Wednesday 
While thoughts of you skip my mind
Then scratch away at my brain 
Like I had the free time of Sunday's

Never let me go
Never let you down
I'll be your deadbeat lover

I try not to dream too much
Just want to run away from fools
Bruises on your face ain't right 
Blunt my mind and sharpen tools
I'll get you out, just not tonight 

Never let me go
Never let you down
I'll be your deadbeat lover

Step on platforms, kids rushing out
Greeted in the typical pissing rain
By a warm embrace all the same
I wonder if I can do without you now
Let's not try it just cover our ground 

Been to shell, your ride's here babe
Don't need to feel cold and alone
I'll let you shift from gear to gear
I've got the heater on, come on out
let me love you for all our years

Never let me go
Never let you down
I'll be your deadbeat lover

Grown old and tired, luck dies out
It all happened a little while back 
Love thrives on old ambitions
Just seems to sleep during the day
This is our home, i'm here to stay

Never let me go
Never let you down
I'll be your deadbeat lover
Wild hearts... Blue jeans and white T-Shirts

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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2013, 08:25:34 PM »
I liked the simplicity of the chorus. I thought that was good ad then I thought you had strong verses to go with it. Xx
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