[habiTat]

To follow Schav.. "Der lauf der dinge"

It's proper good euro dance typa thing

Excellent stuff Dutch, this would sound perfect in a Belgian nightclub, with loads of laser lights etc..

 

[Dutchbeat]

i remixed it (thanks forumites), and added a video now

is this ok / better?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q0lFOP_6LLk

[jrengreen]

I think I've come into this post-remix/video, so listening to the latest iteration with fresh ears. I think you've produced something that's a lovely mix of unusual and approachable. I'd also say that the vocals sound stylized here, rather than problematic or thin. I'd also say that while I'm a big fan of the bass and the drums, there are a couple of electronic noises that feel superfluous? But that's a personal call.

Great work!

[Kafla]

Like a trance version of Blondie's Atomic

Chorus is as catchy as the cold and its a fantastic arrangement - very anthemic DB

The only crit I would have is that you have the most wonderful chorus but the arrangement gets a little muddy - I mean it terms of structure rather than production - clear defined parts to the song help the listener get it quicker

Build the whole thing around multiple choruses and you'll have a hit

[digger72]

Hi,

It all seems slightly mad and bizarrely infectious. I'm not sure where to listen but can't stop. It's nothing like what i listen to, but i think it's great. Are you sending subliminal messages

I hear that Blondie thing to - which is no bad thing as I loved stuff like Atomic and Union, etc.
I can imagine with a thudding beat that this would go down well in a club.

Original and mesmerizing.

All the best,

Digger

[man of simple pleasures]

space jazz pychedelia haha maybes not then but its alrite like!

[Schavuitje]

Mate! I like it much better with the clearer vocals 
Doesn't sound as messy now and I can tell what the words are without reading them
most of the time. 
I would even raise the vocals a little in the mix. Not too much. Just a bit louder.
Very nice DB