It was music first on this one so hope to record soon.
My (probably misplaced) view is the further away the rhyming couplet is, the less it has to rhyme.
So flames/thing works in my twisted brain.
Any nits before I hit "Record"?
Life Is A Fleeting Thing
We're born into this life
We get old, and then we die
And there's hardly any time between
We learn to sing a song
Then it's over, and we're gone
Life is such a fleeting thing
From one to ninety-two
All the candles we go through!
Thinking treasure's buried in the cake
By the time of our demise
We've got pennies in our eyes
Life is such a fleeting thing
{bridge}
How will the world remember you?
The things you say?
The things you do?
Will you be kind?
Will you be cruel?
It's up to you
It's up to you
{spoken}
We're born into this life
We get old, and then we die
Life is such a fleeting thing
{Instr. half bridge}
Will you be kind?
Will you be cruel?
It's up to you
It's up to you
We're born into this life
We get old, and then we die
Life is such a fleeting..
I think it bears repeating..
Life is such a fleeting thing.