[LostBoy]

Hey Tom,

The most important thing mate is that YOU are happy with it,which you are and so there's no problem. 

This is a great song and there are sooo many songs that I have loved in the past that I only know some of the words to and lots more where the lyrics confuse the hell out of me.It never stops me enjoying the song.Im a mood,feel,melody guy long before the lyrics hit home.

I flagged "readily" cos it's just not something I would say.Yes,to me it sounds a little forced,BUT, to you it isn't and that's all that matters mate.

Thanks for taking the advice in the spirit it was meant man and best of luck with it.
Leo 

[MartynRich]

 I find it hard to figure out if it is something that would only bother songwriters.....mmmmm 

You could have hit the nail on the head there. Thinking about the amount of songs that have lyrics far worse than yours...the Emily-Readily bit could easily seep into the national consciousness. Maybe it was just so good we had to try extra-hard to find something wrong with it.

Steadily?

[lillypilly]

This is exactly why i love this forum, this is such a great song and the feedback is so supportive and honest. So have nothing much to add except it is very very good

[IronKnee]

Love the rhythm, a lot. A very good listen, Tom! Very nice. Good hook, and some real nice singing!
Sounds very radio ready and friendly! Yep.....I'm a fan!
This just might be my favorite............dam good song, bud!
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