[theailleana]

Hi everyone!
I just became a member of this forum and would really appreciate some feedback on my music. I am a 24 year old girl from Norway with a degree in psychology, currently taking a break from my studies and trying to work on my music. I recently submitted my own song to a Norwegian contest and I would be really glad if you took the time to listen. Thank you.

http://www.tv2.no/thestream/auditions/entry/21521293

Nostalgia

I stop
And I wonder
When did we lose each other?
So I lay myself down into the field
And I cannot help but wonder
Where did we lose track of time
Because years have passed as days
And I don't know why

Pre-chorus:
So I cry and I beg you
Can we travel back in time?

Chorus:
Because I’ve got Nostalgia
Because I’ve got Nostalgia
And I try to save the past
Make everything last
Just a little longer
Damn you..

You said I’ve changed
Yes, that I’m different
That I’m nothing like you
And that you don’t see me like before
But you don’t know me anymore
So what can I do?
To make you miss me too

Chorus:
Because I’ve got Nostalgia
Because I’ve got Nostalgia
And I try to save the past
Make everything last
Just a little longer
Damn you..

[CaliaMoko]

I suggest moving the song part of this into "Works in Progress" or "Finished songs" if you're looking for feedback. There's also a forum for feedback on lyrics. This forum is for introducing yourself, so you could leave the introduction at the top and, actually, it would be nice if you added more about yourself to it. You may find it helpful to read the guidelines for posting: http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/feedback-on-works-in-progress/rules-and-guidelines-for-posting-in-the-review-forums-read-before-posting/.

Hope this is helpful.
Vicki