Dream Competition : Dreamscape

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« on: August 20, 2015, 01:30:21 PM »
The entries for the Dream competition put me in mind of a track a recorded a few years ago, It's fairly raw, but I hope you like it.

https://soundcloud.com/kevin-ism/dreamscape

Dreamscape by Kevin ISM

(from the album Self Help Exposed)

There's a blue endless ocean
Lapping waves in my mind
So I go with the motion
And these waves are washing through my mind

So I float like a baby
Never born, never mind
And I go with the motion
In my dreams it's good to be alive

In my dreams, it's good to be alive

There's a sea of tomorrows
Where my dreams will collide
So I float with the tide
In my dreams it's good to be alive

So I drift into the future
Yes I go with the motion
And I float with the tide
In my dreams it's good to be alive

In my dreams it's good be alive

So I sleep like a baby
And I dream of my life
As I go with the motion
In my dreams it's good to be alive


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« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2015, 05:39:07 PM »
Hey Kev

You didn't enter the competition. You didn't pass comment on any of the songs that were entered into the competition. I wonder if you listened to any of them.

You have now posted 3 songs in the past 15 days. There is a one song per fortnight ruling that you may not have been aware of, so here's to let you know.

There is also a certain amount of reciprocation expected which you may also not have been aware of, but which ought to be obvious.

I haven't got any authority here in The People's Democratic Republic of Songwriting, but if I was dictator, you would be sent for a period of re-education or, if my gout was playing me up, I might have you taken outside and shot.  :)
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« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2015, 06:06:23 PM »
Hey Kev

You didn't enter the competition. You didn't pass comment on any of the songs that were entered into the competition. I wonder if you listened to any of them.

You have now posted 3 songs in the past 15 days. There is a one song per fortnight ruling that you may not have been aware of, so here's to let you know.

There is also a certain amount of reciprocation expected which you may also not have been aware of, but which ought to be obvious.

I haven't got any authority here in The People's Democratic Republic of Songwriting, but if I was dictator, you would be sent for a period of re-education or, if my gout was playing me up, I might have you taken outside and shot.  :)

Apologies ...  did not mean to break any rules

Kevin

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« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2015, 05:00:08 PM »
Please take 5mins to read through the rules

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