i wrote this a couple of months ago, heavy enough song, i'm not sure what to think of it to be honest, would love some feedback, anything helps and be completely honest,
also, i havent really been able to get a decent melody or music for it, so if anybody wants to they can have a go
thanks
(verse)
yes i know how it hurts
to look between the lies,
but stare right through,
till they bleed your eyes,
Your sniffing your weary life away,
on the stale scent of denial,
trembling, trying to snuff out,
flashes of your makers betrayal,
(chorus)
you paid your health, your wealth, your dignity,
in search of a state of ecstasy,
you lost your love, your life, your sanity,
sitting here listening to a memory,
You know your crazy, right?
You know your crazy right?
(verse)
you pay plenty for those,
pensive pennies of doubht
to give a glimpse of heaven
high in the clouds
they come quick and hard don't they?
those visions of immoral conscience,
but this unholy air you beg to breathe
cannot cleanse the thoughts you've held since,
(bridge)
You've got blurred vision, yet you can see me clear,
oh, johnny why do you think that is my dear?
the line between sanity feels paper thin
i know you feel pain beneath that cardboard grin
(chorus)
(chorus)
(outro)
you lie here lost and alone, in a smokey breeze,
repress the tales when sprung from their cage,
guess it's why you go crazy for those pills,
guess it's why your crazy...
