Hi guys, thanks for the comments, and Nooms, I'll defintely consider your ideas, I really appreciate the time you've taken to listen and analyse this.
I forgot to include the lyrics initially, so here they are, that slower section is deliberately there to change the mood of the song, a kind of 'positive slant' to contrast the 'doubtful' section which preceeds it.
I had a dream and it is staying with me
A house without a door
Broken roof and nothing more
The red brick walls were without openings
It was tall and stood alone
Around the grasses had all grown
I wandered lonely round the ancient ruin
It softly spoke to me
And was swallowed by the trees
Now I wonder what it’s telling me
What it’s telling me
Is it something I'm better to forget
Haunted by the folly I might regret
Am I wasting time
Looking for that rhyme
Is it something
I should leave behind
Oh oh oh
If I can enter
In the centre
A cornucopia
All that you ask for
You’ll never want for
Anything no more
Open up the windows
let the sun show
A fruitful melody
To give a life of plenty
Never empty
All for you and me
In that place there was a tranquil silence
As the rain began to fall
It was a dream and that was all
Now I lay there as I drift away
Hope that I return
See what else there is to learn
I know it was real and that it waits for me
But if I Get inside
Will it do, will it provide?
I think I know what it was telling me
What, it, was telling me.