Great first song. Beautiful singing and lyrics. I don't usually feel competent to offer advice on production, but I think the vocals are panned too far right. I also like to read the lyrics in advance, so it would be cool if you'd post them. I'm sure people will think it's too long. I like long songs, but this one was a little too the same all the way through. I like the addition of the film scenes. That broke it up nicely, but I feel like the music would benefit from some changes, the addition of some new sounds; something to keep the listener from knowing what to expect. Really well done, though.