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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Lost In Space
« Last post by rightly on April 21, 2024, 07:51:58 PM »
You are pushing your boundaries.
And you’ve not started the uni course!?
I'm surprised you're not teaching there.
September is months away!
Yes, the forum has changed. Was it the scamdemic?

I like the song
The backing vocals are unusual.
 Is there a reverse reverb in there?
Keep em coming John. 
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Janey
« Last post by rightly on April 21, 2024, 07:43:28 PM »
Great storytelling and
fine unusual imagery in this one.
Relatable characters
Really is like a film, an alternate reality
that seems to follow you when you've left the cinema.
Good work.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Between Broken And Blessed
« Last post by Elvis Nash on April 21, 2024, 05:18:20 PM »


I'm lying I moved here 7 days ago , i still havent caught a fish
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Recording / Build A Bitch
« Last post by Elvis Nash on April 21, 2024, 03:12:13 PM »


My wife and I had a talk , Oh she does this all her self , no she dosen't she has a million dollar producer and AAAAA session players to get all that , but we both agree its quiet catchy
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Between Broken And Blessed
« Last post by Elvis Nash on April 21, 2024, 02:03:57 PM »
Some artists sing their life , others sing stories for chart busters and money
Guy Clark, a award songwriter hated commercial songs. He died at home singing a song with a friend at his side  .
Being my age everything is somewhere south of a memory on better times, Hope raises in the morning light and dies at midnight
I'm trying to survive till I die of old age , Do I have a fish on this line ? nope another false alarm. It be cheaper eating the bait 
Thanks
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: I thought I was flying
« Last post by pompeyjazz on April 21, 2024, 01:20:22 PM »
Dig that jazzy 3/4 feel @moraamarolaloba and the lofi drums fit in really well. As usual there's a great element of experimentation in your songs and they could never be called conventional - That's brilliant. I love some of the synth ear candy that is floating around in the background too - Super stuff as always
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Feedback on Finished songs / Lost In Space
« Last post by pompeyjazz on April 21, 2024, 01:17:50 PM »
Hi All, long time no post from me. I guess I got kinda disillusioned with the forum. A lot of the guys who used to be on here when it used to be pretty vibrant place don't post any more. I guess things change but it's a shame not to see them around here.

I'm still writing at my usual pace and trying to explore different genres and musical ideas. This is something that has just been completed. I'm trying to brush up on some production techniques before starting my University course in September so there are a few experimental ideas in this track - Hope you enjoy the listen



Lost In Space

Ch
Lost in space
Disappeared without a trace
Lost in time
Thought I was losing my mind
Lost and found
Underground or overground
Communication
Routed to another destination

V1
I'm speeding away from earth
Spinning in circles, slowly, slowly

Ch

V2
I'll never see another face
Cut the ignition – throws me, throws me

Breakdown

Final Ch
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Feedback on Finished songs / I thought I was flying
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on April 21, 2024, 11:17:32 AM »
Hola chicos!
This song came to me in a very special day, just when I was realizing that Life is a constant battle and does not take into account how old we may be when it places us in front of another challenge to take on. When you think you can have a break, another pot falls on your head hahaha




I am the sane as always
adorning life and death
with words that give calm
to deal with fears an traps
hidden on this battelfield

I thought i was flying
I though I was running
but all things pass beyonnd any watch

The landscape painted by my steps
is being left behind behibd behind

so much life breathed
so many things sleeping
in the box of oblivion
as I walk
through the days
before my night arrives
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Between Broken And Blessed
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on April 21, 2024, 11:05:25 AM »
I should have read the warnings signs that most pro songwriters disappeared when streaming started , At least a big % of them , No money to be made
I liked the hook so much I wrote it twice

 


Love this one with your voice!!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Between Broken And Blessed
« Last post by Elvis Nash on April 21, 2024, 04:53:51 AM »
Oh yes, that's the way we like it!
I don't consider myself a country fan but I'm a sucker for these kinds of songs (I think of them as some kind of cross over hybrid I guess)
Great performance and production and overall a solid song, a stable verse and a catchy chorus with a good hook.
Good use of dynamics in the arrangement.
Probably not the most unique or innovative lyrics there ever was but a great fit for the style.
Well done!


Its a contrived story the first one , thats radio , that's not my life , the 2nd one is
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