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Lyrics / Re: 42 days
« Last post by hardtwistmusic on Yesterday at 06:52:23 PM »
LOVED the chorus.  And I've been to enough AA meetings that I get it completely.  The second verse is soooooo powerful, I'd consider opening with it.  Just a suggestion. 

For a song/reference point, I'd suggest listening to Kenny Chesney's "That's why I'm here."  It's beautiful and similar in tone to your lyric.  (I think it's Kenny Chesney, but it could be Tim McGraw) 
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Lyrics / Re: All of us suffer for Love
« Last post by hardtwistmusic on Yesterday at 06:47:42 PM »
I didn't "easily find a tune" for this as I read it, but that just means it needs a mildly complex tune.  It did eventually "sing" instead of just read, so it's a "melody ready" lyric.  LOVE the concept.  And it's totally true.  All of us DO "suffer for love."  Love without pain isn't love.  Love expresses itself through sacrifice, so there has to be pain involved if there is truly love involved. 

I think this is an exceptional lyric.
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Lyrics / Re: Didn't
« Last post by hardtwistmusic on Yesterday at 06:43:50 PM »
Absolutely stunning.  And the lyric is simply demanding a melody.  WOW.  I can't say enough good things about this brilliant emotional expression. 
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Lyrics / Re: Didn't
« Last post by Younger Hills on Yesterday at 04:03:35 PM »
This is beautiful, Paul! Can feel the pain through your words.
Magnificent!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: ( new song ) Solar wind.
« Last post by redrhodie on Yesterday at 01:33:44 PM »
Hey Kev,

Second listen for me on this. Haunting vocals. Like the synthy sounds. They add to the story and mood. I get a floating through space feel from the music that works great with the lyrics.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: 24 Hour Emotional Breakdown Service
« Last post by redrhodie on Yesterday at 01:28:51 PM »
So sweet. I never know what to expect from your songs, but I'm never disappointed and always listen to the end. You're a great songwriter with a unique style. You know how to use your voice, literally and figuratively.

Lynn
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Lyrics / Re: Didn't
« Last post by redrhodie on Yesterday at 01:21:17 PM »
Great lyrics. Feels really honest and painful. Sorry you're going through a tough time. It looks like you're doing the best thing you can, and using the pain to create. Look forward to hearing this.

Lynn
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: When The Animals Escaped From The Zoo
« Last post by CaliaMoko on Yesterday at 01:18:08 PM »
That started my day off with a big smile. Thanks so much! I need more of these. I admit to a bit of envy, though. I wish I had the opportunity to jam with some of you people.... <<sigh>> It's just as well, though, at least until I can get my fingers to hit the proper strings on the guitar consistently.  ::)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: The end... new song by 4Below
« Last post by redrhodie on Yesterday at 01:15:14 PM »
The melody in verses is a little monotonous, but I think it works. It makes the chorus seem more powerful. The part where you belt it out that leads into the instrumental ending is great. I think you should add some background vocals to the chorus to oomph it up even more if you're going to rework it, but it's already really good.

Lynn
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: When The Animals Escaped From The Zoo
« Last post by redrhodie on Yesterday at 01:07:16 PM »
I think this is pretty adorable.
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