Hi
I like this song of yours
Your production skills, and musical skills are to be envied.
Your song lyrics are to the point, really upfront.
...
I have to say
It's what you write about
music business and the different creative approaches
that really make me think.

You've been about in the business and about , trying to get into the business too.

My Music means a lot to me personally So I continue with it.
If I can be as good, in my own way, as Cohen, Dylan, Reed are good their ways.
I will without hesitation, be able to consider myself as artistically Successful.
I consider this a realistic ambition.
Realising it would mean a lot to me and wouldn't have to mean anything to anyone else.

... to some that might sound romantic, but
     I find that generally, ladies have difficulty with it
      When they realise that their charming partner
       isn't really interested in keeping up with the jones's. Etc.

The little i've seen of the business side of music
And even just audio editing
I've found repulsive to varying degrees.

I've friends about that still inform me of their next schemes to turn music into money.
I try to stay polite, but it's tiring.
If I were to, even try to write for commercial success I'm sure the results would be a grotesque failure, and the road to it would be silly. I'd be striving to become a 2nd rate imitation, at best.
   How do I become an Asian elvis presley impersonator.
Life is elsewhere.

Sorry, I get sidetracked with this business issue.

Elvis Nash you've a wealth of verifiable talent.
I think you're blessed!

This might be lacking a chorus
I don't care much for choruses
Still the ending might be a tad abrupt.

Hi
When I read 90s pop I was thinking oh no, not one of those bruising oasis tunes.
This song is really charming, heartwarming
Hearing the first few bars, I was pleasantly surprised.
When the lyrics go faster I get an elvis costello vibe.

It is uplifting and seems to capture a feeling of first time innocence.

Well I'm not even middle aged - I'm an old b*****d!! But I totally got off one this one. It's really catchy and would go down great live. I couldn't dance when I was young enough and I'd probably do myself a mischief if I tried now, but I was tempted!! Seriously this is another great track. No crits at all from me.

Haha. Thanks @ChrisPrice

I can't dance either

The first hello can be aimed at teenagers , Age has nothing to do with it
Good job man , all tight in the right places

Thanks, Elvis.

Morning John @pompeyjazz

The production on this is up to your usual high standards.

I listened to it twice. The first time without reading the lyrics and my first impressions was that it is a good song, but would benefit from a strong chorus.

I listened again, this time reading the lyrics and noted that what I assumed to be the verse, you refer to as the chorus and what I thought was the bridge was in fact the verse.

To me, this could be. elevated into a truly great song if you halved what you call the chorus sections and then after what you call the verse sections, go into a big melodic chorus

Just my opinion!!!