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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Next World
« Last post by Welsh Steve on Yesterday at 09:04:58 PM »
WOW!!!!
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Lyrics / Lyrics of new song "Here I am"
« Last post by Alex Kohlgrüber on August 17, 2022, 09:24:34 PM »
Hey,

these are the lyrics of an upcoming song of mine "Here I am" which I am going to record in September.
I wanted to write about the fact that life just passes by so quickly and that sometimes it just feels too short to fulfill everything you want to.
Feel free to give feedback what you think.
It is more that welcome ;-)


Here I am

I’ve been holding on for years
Day and night I am trying
To find the keys to open up my doors
I’ve been holding on for years
And instantly I am sighing
When I start to contemplate

Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In my mind I’m running up and down this windy boulevard
Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In our minds we’re running up and down these hills of our past
Here we are

Last night I wondered why
How fast the time has gone by
I asked myself how could that be
Short time ago we still crawled on our knees

Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In my mind I’m running up and down this windy boulevard
Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In our minds we’re running up and down these hills of our past
Here we are

Asking myself how could that be
I there a light that I have not seen?

Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In my mind I’m running up and down this windy boulevard
Here I am - Here we are
In this moment healing scars
In our minds we’re running up and down these hills of our past

Here I am – in this moment
In my mind I’m running up and down this windy boulevard
Here we are - in this moment
In our minds we’re running up and down these hills of our past
Here I am - Here we are
In this moment counting stars
In my mind I’m running up and down this windy boulevard
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Here For You
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 06:00:25 PM »
Nice rhyming as always! Not too obvious or unnatural. Very nice.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Day is Over (Laid Back)
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 05:50:05 PM »
Very pro sounding indeed. Maybe could do with more of a distinctive repeated hook. But some very nice keyboards and vocals, and atmosphere is spot on.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Scarlet Please
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 11:57:54 AM »
Super interesting sounds and atmosphere which really kept my interest.
There's a great power to the backing in places and the way you sing "scarlet".
I thought it ended a bit suddenly so perhaps one more "scarlet" would work?
Lyrics are subtle - despite the clues I might not have understood without the description, so I might have been thinking scarlet = blood...!
Very intriguing and original work again.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Betrayal (Collaboration with Groove Nazar)
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 11:48:46 AM »
Well I guess you got three songs out of this project!
Great rhyming (oath, close, understand it, planned it....)
Band are great on this too.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What You Cryin' For?
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 11:44:43 AM »
Nice work, right up my street - touches of Foo Fighters which is never a bad thing. Really like the changes in rhythm.
Perhaps some timing issues in places if it really wanted to be perfect but I think that's not the point.
I think the struggle was worth it.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Where's the eye?
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 11:40:21 AM »
Another cool song. I can see you thought a lot about arrangements. I really like songs that have their unique DNA and leaving out the bass is a really interesting idea - it makes the chorus "smaller" but it still stands out. Your vocal makes me listen, a great thing, and I really like your use of more complex words that we don't often hear in songs (gruelling...).
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The Bar / Re: Same riff though Verses and Choruses
« Last post by adamfarr on August 17, 2022, 10:48:54 AM »
Love Profusion by Madonna, Hangover, Higher or actually almost anything else by Taio Cruz. Great songs that just work. Excellent for when someone asks you to play something after midnight...
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The Bar / Re: Same riff though Verses and Choruses
« Last post by PeteS on August 16, 2022, 09:25:23 PM »
I can think of a few that have the same chord sequence all the way through.  The magic (if it is that!) is what you do with them.

Take Radioactive by Imagine Dragons.  On an acoustic guitar it is Capo on 2 and Am, C, G, D all the way trough.   Doesn't sound like it though.
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