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Lovely happy song - great collaboration! Don’t hear many of those!! Or maybe I just don’t write many of them! That guitar work is fab and I love the organ lurking in there. Great!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Five Days
« Last post by MonnoDB on Today at 07:38:15 PM »
Well JB you also know what I think of this but that fab low vocal deserves public appreciation! Oh and the rest of it! Love this one, no surprise there :-) !!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: The Man in the Moon Sheds a Tear
« Last post by MonnoDB on Today at 07:36:45 PM »
Hey @Movin Flavour .. Wow!! Love this! Great piece beautifully sung! So gentle... just captivating!!  The instrumental parts are just lovely... very original theme and lyrics. Great stuff!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Eyes Of Ocean Blue
« Last post by MonnoDB on Today at 07:18:08 PM »
Oh that lovely warm vocal in a sea of moody, mellowness!! Production spot on. Love the instrumentation.. lyrics just great. I appear to like just about everything about this. You really do put out some fine, quality songs @montydog !!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Eyes Of Ocean Blue
« Last post by Cawproductions on Today at 07:05:36 PM »
Very very nice song Montydog

For me the super smooth low end vocal and that steel guitar slide sounds amazing.

Disagree with losing the lows in your vocal, you have the vocal sitting nicely with the double bass and low end, gives a real intimate feel.

Thumbs up dude.

Class.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Overspill
« Last post by Cawproductions on Today at 06:58:26 PM »
Hi Neil

Great story to this, and the lyrics tell the story well.

Agree with the drum sound, I think its very Roomy, a bit heavy rock esque, I would have gone with a sidestick or rim maybe, Just my taste.

A couple of things troubled me, The very beginning of the OVERSPILL bit sounds troubling, like one of the vocals is tad out of tune, drums are LOOOUUUD.
I think the tempo is ok but maybe the drum patterns could be a little more complicated to give a sense of faster BPM.

Liked the ending section with the solo guitar, thats section has a nice balance.

All of the above is purely my opinion tho dude, and its your track. Good job we aren't all the same, life would be dull.

Great song tho and hope tells your friends story well.

Top work Neil

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been playing this song alot......great sound coming outa my speakers when this is playing... :) just so good had to comment again.. :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Overspill
« Last post by shadowfax on Today at 03:58:09 PM »
I'm gonna agree with Pauls comments and add that I think it's a little bit too slow and the snare seems wrong for the song...it's a sort of big spacey thing..maybe a tighter sounding snare..maybe :)
the overspill chorus is good and underused IMHO...
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Lyrics / Low on Gasoline
« Last post by Wicked Deeds on Today at 03:02:13 PM »
Low on Gasoline

After 52 years and my fair share of tears,
I am humbled  by the things that I have seen.
I was the second of three. 'twas my wish to be free
now the engine's running low on gasoline.

Yeah, I could put the ball in the net,
kiss  the girls then forget.
I could wait with balance and poise
amidst all of the noise
now the engine's running low on gasoline.

To the loved ones I've  lost,  I'm still  counting the cost.
Does it matter if we're good or if we're mean?
To the friends who have gone, I've been driving  along 
but the engine's running low on gasoline.

Yeah, I could put the ball in the net,
kiss the girls then forget.
I could wait with balance and poise
amidst all of the noise
now the engine's running low on gasoline.
The engine's running low on gasoline.

We were standing in the doorway whilst their hands released confetti.
You were mine.
We raised children from our marriage 'til  the horses lost their carriage.
This, is life.

Yeah, I could put the ball in the net,
kiss the girls then forget.
I could wait with balance and poise
amidst all of the noise
now the engine's running low on gasoline.
The engine's running low on gasoline.
The engine's running low on gasoline.

After 52 years and my fair share of tears, I am humbled  by the things that I have seen;
running low on gasoline.


Written by Paul Vasey Decrmber 2018





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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Five Days
« Last post by cowparsleyman on Today at 02:34:09 PM »
Hi Johan

I haven't heard this yet, but I will as soon as I'm able, anything you do is pure magic
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