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Title: ENTRY SUMMER SONG COMP "Bathsalt Jesus"/ MRI [producers' cut]
Post by: ABeautifulVirus on August 29, 2013, 07:12:51 AM
hi folks :) here's our entry for the summer song competition. watch in HD for best audio/image. enjoy! - DTT

"Bathsalt Jesus" / genre: heavy alternative
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-0TR4tj0ao
(producers' cut)


Bathsalt Jesus
Words & Music by Daren Thomas Turner © 2013  / MRI
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Closer is the last wave and far away from here
Halloween costumed and dead tsunamical
A twilight of your idols; a midnight of your sun
Insufferable as the company of one

Seriously are you kidding me?
Starring in your own no one show
Instagrammed like a jellyfish hash-tagged with #noSpine

Colder than a dark star and frozen into space
All your motivation an accoutrement at best
Bedizen me with Snooki like lobster in a sauce
Alive when you kill it off the planet earth

At minute number seventeen
I stopped my own cold heart
I closed my eyes and walked out of the summertime

Over, like these movie credits shot out into space
All the extras' names are written on your face
All the characters you always got to play
(They perished deus ex machina: in a botox hurricane)

I was born to die just to save the human race
I was born to die just so you could eat my face
I was born to die just to save the human race
I was born to die just so you could eat my face


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Daren Thomas Turner: guitars, vocals
George Matthews: drums
Alan Cruz: bass, analog samples

Engineered by Daren Thomas Turner
Produced by Danarchy and Daren Thomas Turner © 2013 MRI
Title: Re: ENTRY SUMMER SONG COMP "Bathsalt Jesus"/ MRI
Post by: Jess on August 29, 2013, 05:19:00 PM
I thought this competition finished? ???
Title: Re: ENTRY SUMMER SONG COMP "Bathsalt Jesus"/ MRI
Post by: dinnerwithgreedo on September 05, 2013, 03:56:22 PM
Well.... this is awkward.

;)
Title: Re: ENTRY SUMMER SONG COMP "Bathsalt Jesus"/ MRI
Post by: ABeautifulVirus on September 09, 2013, 02:35:04 PM
Well.... this is awkward.

;)

LOL ;p

btw for what it's worth the new official version is up in place of other one ;p the "producers' cut"