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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Alan Starkie on August 21, 2013, 05:31:31 PM
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Anyone want to throw some ideas at this:
https://soundcloud.com/alanstarkie/forum-master/s-2FVvf
There's a big chorus to add yet...
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I'm happy to lend a hand voice whatever if you need it but I am not really able to do much until mid ish September!
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Too many "doo doo doos" for my liking could have added a few "dah dah dahs" along the way, loved the "woo woo woo's" .
Well done Alan, potential. Terry.
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Thanks Terry.
Did contemplate a couple of blah blah blah's but I didn't want to gone across too high brow.
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Thanks, Alan
for getting this going!!!
sounds great!!!!,
thanks!
i am pretty sure the dooodooo doosss, and daahhhdaah are meant to be displaced by words, Terry
yet give a serious direction for the singing melody...
sounds great for a megaforumcollaboration project!!!!
perhaps the lyricists can have a go at this
i am not sure if we need to be starting seperate threads here...why not in one long thread
if not too much distraction
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Sounds great...if you want a Knopfleresque guitar solo...just say the word.
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yes, we want that, THAT sounds good, Science base,
thanks for participating!!!!
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Wrote the basics of a chorus (suitable for lots of vocals).
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cool!
is it in the link?
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Ha it is in the link, thanks Alan, i think tha is very suitable, excellent!!!!!
thanks
for the chorus, it goes tadadtataaadataaaa two times, as far as i hear two times the same notes, i was wondering secong time around whether the last not, the last: taaa, could perhaps be a different note than the first last: taaaa......well, just a thought...it sounds to me like two times the same....
but not taht i know for sure
but i think this will really work with plenty of time for ad libs and solo bits in the last part of the track
i appreciate it very much
let's see waht other forumites think... i saw some bits of lyrical ideas offered by dogmax, by fischermans and an extensive lyrics by Habitat (perhaps, songwriters...we should choose one topic in which we place all ideas and communication for this mega project???)
and i may be missing other lyrical ideas offered, sorry about that
is there any way we can try whether these lyrics are to be fitted to the music...?
keep the process going ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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I'm open to any changes whatsoever Dutch.
I'm completely fine with doing what the forum wants.
Just let me know and I'll make changes to suit.
Alan.