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Title: Coast to Coast
Post by: Wolvesonfire on June 09, 2013, 12:51:04 AM
this is a new song, not quite finished yet..




every single slut that claws her way into a bed
god damn, i am just like them
every time you trust someone, that takes more than he says
did i really not mean to fuck you over?

it's this life.
don't bother and wait, i won't ever really come around
and you were right.
you're miles ahead. with your legs spread
coast to coast

i spent 'last summer' in a foreign land.
you said it, but did you mean it?
and you came around just when i had almost given in
i never will again

how was life like before we met?
i never thought i could forget...
Title: Re: Coast to Coast
Post by: benjo on June 09, 2013, 07:52:10 PM
hey wolvesonfire,

love what you did with the coast to coast thing on the vid
enjoyed this alround for me was nice take care...
Title: Re: Coast to Coast
Post by: BooBoo on June 13, 2013, 05:02:59 PM
It definitely gets the point straight across. The 'coast to coast' bit is really good!
Title: Re: Coast to Coast
Post by: Thomas Frederick on June 23, 2013, 01:19:08 AM
Despite the hard-hitting subject matter, this song is very charming!

I also like that it's quite tongue-in-cheek! :D

Look forward to hearing more.