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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: Wolvesonfire on June 09, 2013, 12:51:04 AM
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this is a new song, not quite finished yet..
every single slut that claws her way into a bed
god damn, i am just like them
every time you trust someone, that takes more than he says
did i really not mean to fuck you over?
it's this life.
don't bother and wait, i won't ever really come around
and you were right.
you're miles ahead. with your legs spread
coast to coast
i spent 'last summer' in a foreign land.
you said it, but did you mean it?
and you came around just when i had almost given in
i never will again
how was life like before we met?
i never thought i could forget...
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hey wolvesonfire,
love what you did with the coast to coast thing on the vid
enjoyed this alround for me was nice take care...
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It definitely gets the point straight across. The 'coast to coast' bit is really good!
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Despite the hard-hitting subject matter, this song is very charming!
I also like that it's quite tongue-in-cheek! :D
Look forward to hearing more.