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Title: 1st song posted
Post by: lightspeed182 on July 08, 2009, 03:39:15 PM

Calling   


4/4 quick tempo

   

E7                                           A7                                                E7         

  Stars, stars burning bright in the middle of a wind swept night�They�re calling

         A7                                                                           E7
  Your name inside my mind whispers patterns I can�t find and I�m falling

            B7                                        Cshpm           A
  On the ground between the trees I get down upon my knees

             E7
  And I�m calling out your name but it doesn�t sound the same


  I shout and scream and holla into a void of fear and shame
                   
                          A7                          E7
  And the stars are calling. The stars are calling

         B7                                      Cshpm             A
  I get down upon my knees and look up between the trees

              E7
  And the trees call out your name but it doesn�t sound the same


                 instrumental E7 A7 E7 B7 Cshpm A E7

E7                             A7                                         E7
  Blue moon in the sky I look up and I wonder why you�re calling

     A7                                                                                        E7
  A name that can�t be reached, what wisdom do you preach? �Cos I am falling

            B7                                       Cshpm            A
  On the ground between the trees I get down upon my knees

             E7
  And I�m calling out your name but it doesn�t sound the same

                         
                instrumental E7 A7 E7

            B7                                        Cshpm           A
  On the ground between the trees I get down upon my knees

             E7
  And I�m calling out your name but it doesn�t sound the same

   
                 fade out

                                                                        Steven Sims 09

Title: Re: 1st song posted
Post by: waspfromipanema on July 08, 2009, 03:47:24 PM

Hi Steve

I'm moving this into the 'lyrics' section. Thanks for posting them
Cathy :)

Title: Re: 1st song posted
Post by: waspfromipanema on July 08, 2009, 04:01:19 PM

Hmmm, ok, the forum's not letting me move the topic.
Tone!!!!! where are ya? can you move this topic please? :)

Nice lyrics Steve, I'm intrigued and want to hear the song now!
Cathy

Title: Re: 1st song posted
Post by: tone on July 08, 2009, 05:00:25 PM