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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: HardCore on February 21, 2022, 05:07:02 PM
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Contex: it’s a very personal song.
a girl is confused about what she feels for this guy.
maybe the guy scared her because his feelings were too strong too soon
Now they decided to take a break for her to figure out what she really wants.
I would really much appreciate some tips on the grammar, and if any of the sentences sound wired to a native speaker.
Many thanks
Verse1
I wrote down a few lines
And sing for you
So when I am not there
I won’t fade away
It’s been a few month
That I’ve been chasing you
Then outside old street tube …
No you won’t forget
Pre chorus1
Is it alright if we stay in my hotel room
Is it alright if I leave my mark on you
Yeah it’s alright
Chorus
Yeah it’s alright
Even if we are worlds apart
Yeah it’s alright
Even if we are worlds apart
Verse2
I am sorry too much pressure on you
Now what should I do, maybe disappear
Or let’s go to Florence or anywhere you want
So just take my hand and walk with me
Pre chorus2
Is it alright if I hold you tight all night
Is it alright if I love your Christmas lights
Yeah it’s alright
Chorus
Yeah it’s alright
Even if we are worlds apart
Yeah it’s alright
Even if we are worlds apart