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Title: new demo {rooftops)
Post by: macker71165 on February 19, 2022, 07:23:57 PM

https://soundcloud.com/tony-mcvey/rooftops?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Title: Re: new demo {rooftops)
Post by: CaliaMoko on February 20, 2022, 03:57:38 AM

Rhyming "world" and "hurts". I like it. Supports the unstable theme really well. I like the bass line. Mine are always so boring. This is much more interesting. I would like to see the lyrics in the post so I can follow along and look back while I'm thinking about it. I hear some nice touches in there.

I've seen you around the forum but I haven't been very active the past couple years, so I wanted to be sure to comment on this one.

Vicki

Title: Re: new demo {rooftops)
Post by: macker71165 on February 20, 2022, 09:21:42 AM

Thnx for your feed back Vicki 👍