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Title: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: Wicked Deeds on December 06, 2021, 07:32:14 PM
As many will know, my Mam passed away earlier this year. I wrote a number of songs that reflected my thoughts and mood at that time. I didn't fully produce the majority of those songs but I still hold them dear to my heart.

Today would have been her birthday and so, this is for my beautiful Mam Margaret. It's called 'Dress Rehearsal'.

https://m.soundcloud.com/pvasey1/dress-rehearsalmaster

You are never far from my thoughts. "We prayed that Nan would take you home."





Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: pompeyjazz on December 06, 2021, 07:56:16 PM
Lovely tribute to your Mam Paul. Love that acoustic sound and super vocals
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: PaulAds on December 06, 2021, 08:04:11 PM
Fab vocals and a lovely acoustic guitar sound.

Stripped-back format suits the song perfectly…and with a voice and a touch like that, you’d never really need anything else.

Lovely.
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: moraamarolaloba on December 06, 2021, 08:05:25 PM
Hola @Wicked Deeds (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19231)
Hello, I accompany you in the feeling again, everything is refreshed on certain dates ...
It seemed to me a beautiful song, I can only tell you that, beautiful like the lyrics!!! Preciosa!!!

Stay well
Mora
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: irwin on December 08, 2021, 11:36:38 PM
Nice song, very emotional. Emotion came across, mission accomplishment. Have to  say great melody man. Was smooth....Lyrics well written. I love the Guitar playing....had to mention it, could not have ended my comment without saying.

Lovely tribute song.  Keep up the good work.

Irwin
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: MonnoDB on December 14, 2021, 10:55:41 PM
I listened to this on SC a while ago - it's just lovely! Such emotion.. A beautiful tribute.. very touching..

You really deliver emotion / feelings so well @Wicked Deeds (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19231)

K
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: crystalsuzy on December 21, 2021, 03:57:23 AM
Hi Paul,

This is a such beautiful tribute to your mom. So much emotion, so beautifully expressed  :-*

Your voice is superb, as is the lovely acoustic guitar  :-*
Title: Re: Dress Rehearsal
Post by: Theatreman on December 21, 2021, 07:01:40 PM
Intimate, personal, honest and very touching. A beautiful tribute and a lovely song.