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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: pompeyjazz on December 05, 2021, 04:43:22 PM
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Hi all, Here's another number from Cécile and myself. It's a love song with a retro feel to it. Tried hard to create a 60's / 70's vibe to it
I hope that you enjoy the listen. It does seem very quiet on the forum, It would be great to see some of the long lost faces back on the scene.
Love to all
Stars reign down in one in a million
But that isn't true
Who knows if it's one in a trillion
Cos then I found you
Oh just sweet, sweet promise
That's what we said from the start
Spending our time together
Giving my heart, feeling your heart
Whatever has passed
Oh this it will last
We both will find
We're two of a kind
You make my heart shine
You make my heart beat
It's not possible to live
Without you now
One on a million
Don't know how it happened
But you are the one
The one on a million
I'll love you for a million years
Nothing counts now except us
We belong to each other
Thank the stars we are together
You're one a million
You're the one in a million
I'll love you for a million years
You're one a million
You're one in a million
I'll love you for a million years
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Hola @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269)
How nice to see you!!!
The atmosphere of your track is really nice, other kind of sounds and style, soft and pleasant to listen to.
From things I see and hear, it gives me the feeling that retro music is in fashion, as if people began to look on yesterday to feel good.
Very nice song. I think it's one of the best you've ever made, and your voice sounds very well modulated, just like that of Cecile!!
I'm very happy to see you here again, I don't know what happens in the forum, it's as if there had been a tornado and everything had blown up ... :-\
Stay well
Mora
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Hello you two 😀
Super retro feel on this. Your voices always sound lovely together, but they blend better here than ever, I think.
Really enjoyed this…it’s so direct and heartfelt.
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You certainly nailed that retro feeling @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) ... @Melusine2 (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22580) sounding sultry and gorgeous in this.. yes, the blend is lovely - really love it when you two sing together.. magic...
Simply a beautiful love song!
Wonderful!
K
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In Deed pleasant to listen to. Duets I don't hear them too often where I am from my locals and I tell them we need to have more Duets from our local artiste but that is that Back to your song. It was well done in my opinion there were a moment where it was pitchy but just once I'd notice. You sound good together and I would think you look good together too. Would sure click and listen to your other song when next you post here.
Irwin