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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: moraamarolaloba on November 26, 2021, 12:58:12 PM
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Hello everyone, I don't know if you have seen in the news the evolution of one of the volcanoes of the Canary Islands, this one on the island of La Palma. I was born on the opposite island, Tenerife, although I have lived on the peninsula, Spain, since I was little, but I have many friends there who are having a terrible time.
Well, it is not that it has anything to do with my song, except the title, but I did a coparatica between love and a volcano and here is the result.
I hope it entertains you, the video is very funny (it took me a lot of work to do it).
Take care
Love doesn't just love
it transform like flame x2
Love
it's like vertigo x2
that surrounds you
and without falling
you are falling
falling
falling and going up
everything at once
everything at once
everything at once
It's agony
and spring
all at once x3
Seawater
that evaporates
under the fire
of the volcano. x2
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I found this unsettling - to match the theme perhaps.. Engaging as always, a very interesting soundscape - I really liked the piano and of course as usual lovely guitar work.
Video is fantastic - very clever.
Another great creation @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) - such originality in theme and production. I'm such a fan.
K
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Hola @MonnoDB (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19820)
Nice to read from you!!!
I was missing you! Thank you, your comments on my songs are always so kind!
I hope you all are well, for many months I have the feeling that the forum is dying? :-\
Big kiss
Mora
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oh great
very unusual
i like all these elements coming together
The guitar but the overall production, very smooth!
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oh great
very unusual
i like all these elements coming together
The guitar but the overall production, very smooth!
Hola @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)
Thank you so much!! Stay well and have a nice Sunday!
Mora
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I loved the pulsating bass pattern combined with the Latin rhythm on this one @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) Your vocals are hypnotic and so suited to the vibe that you create. Another excellent piece of work
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Hi Mora,
Yes, saw the volcano troubles in La Palma - very scary.
We love visiting Lanzarote (home from home).
Loving the dark edge to the track - has your signature hypnotic vibe to it.
Some really nice, understated guitar work.
The video was great - reminded me of when James Bond used his watch to unzip a dress. :D
Digger
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I loved the pulsating bass pattern combined with the Latin rhythm on this one @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) Your vocals are hypnotic and so suited to the vibe that you create. Another excellent piece of work
Hola @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269)
Me alegra mucho verte!!! Thank you very much. I ope you all are ok.
Staywell
Mora
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Great song and the video is fabulous!
It’s amazing how many earthquakes and what-have-you have been occurring over the last 18 months or so…lots of it doesn’t get reported much…but I often get the feeling that something biblical is approaching.
I'm sure loads of work must have gone into making the video...the quality is very much appreciated.
PS I hope that’s your hands on his back rather than his hands on your front ;)
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Hi Mora,
Yes, saw the volcano troubles in La Palma - very scary.
We love visiting Lanzarote (home from home).
Loving the dark edge to the track - has your signature hypnotic vibe to it.
Some really nice, understated guitar work.
The video was great - reminded me of when James Bond used his watch to unzip a dress. :D
Digger
Hola @digger72 (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=9823)
Buenos días!!!
Thanks for your comment. I love that you are comfortable there when you visit the island, I have not been to the Canary Islands in general for many years, the last time I was thoughtful because I saw several, more than one, signs that said "Spanish is spoken." LOL
Mora