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Title: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: irwin on November 23, 2021, 01:40:47 PM
This is my wedding anniversary music video I created it last year (2020) and showed it to all my relatives and this year (2021) I decided to make it public. I do hope you guys like it also, would like song to be critiqued. All comments are welcome. (Oh!, I&H is the first letter of our names).

Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: moraamarolaloba on November 23, 2021, 06:31:10 PM
Hola @irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)
It's a very nice song, very nice listening!  Congratulations for your wedding anniversary!

Mora
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: irwin on December 04, 2021, 05:19:38 PM
Hola @irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)
It's a very nice song, very nice listening!  Congratulations for your wedding anniversary!

Mora
I am very thankful for your comment on my song. Glad you enjoyed the listen.

Irwin
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: IronKnee on December 04, 2021, 09:04:22 PM
What a beautiful family you have. You are truly blessed. This song is a great testament to you and your family.
Great stuff, Irwin!!
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: Fletch on December 05, 2021, 09:32:38 AM
HI @irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)

Well that was a really lovely Tribute...  Super Groovy... :)
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: Wicked Deeds on December 05, 2021, 11:53:03 AM
@irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)

Congratulations on reaching your anniversary.  The recording is clear and therefore allows us to hear the sincerity of the lyrics .  A lovely tribute to your partner.

Paul
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: digger72 on December 05, 2021, 03:38:14 PM
Hi Irwin,

Congrats on 27 years.
Hope you and yours are well.

Loving the synth tones.
Nice bass rumbling under there.

Vocals are very soulful.

Digger
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: irwin on December 08, 2021, 10:46:59 PM
What a beautiful family you have. You are truly blessed. This song is a great testament to you and your family.
Great stuff, Irwin!!

Hi IronKnee, thank you. I will be bringing out some new music soon.
Title: Re: Wedding Anniversary I&H
Post by: PaulAds on December 09, 2021, 11:19:17 PM
Congratulations! We managed to chalk up 25 years…gone by in a flash.

She’s a lovely singer and the video is lovely too. I liked how the kick drum seemed like a heartbeat running through the song.

Great recording too 😀