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Title: Baby Blue
Post by: charlottesadler on September 14, 2021, 08:52:04 PM
Can I get some opinions on a song I wrote? It's called baby blue :)

Remembering how you’d call my name
Said loving me is a losing game,
And now I know, life will never be the same
Sun-kissed skin and caramel eyes,
Young hearts under pale blue skies,
Because our love, it felt so true,
Can’t believe I ended up losing you

Because now my heart is baby blue,
Flashbacks of all that we went through,
My mind's holding memories of you,
Those memories they’ll have to do,
‘Cause now my heart is baby blue
Now my heart is baby blue

Baby blue
Baby blue
Now my heart is baby blue
Baby blue
Baby blue
How’d i get so attached to you?

Travelling through our little city,
What it became, oh what a pity,
Everything changed,
but we’re still the same,
Loving you is a losing game,
Pale blue eyes, mythical skies
Try so hard to hold back our cries,
We held on, but it wasn’t pretty
Promised me you’d never leave
So why am I sat here alone
Waiting for you to hit my phone

Because now my heart is baby blue,
Flashbacks of all that we went through
My mind’s holding memories of you,
And those memories they’ll have to do,
‘Cause now my heart is baby blue,
Now my heart is baby blue

ice cold heart you can’t escape
holiday photos by the fireplace
there’s only so much a photo can tell
i think you know this story well
oh it’s the story of me and you
but now everything is baby blue

Because now my heart is baby blue
Flashbacks of all that we went through
My Mind’s holding memories of you,
And those memories they’ll have to do,
‘Cause now my heart is baby blue,
Now my heart is baby blue

Baby blue, Baby blue
Baby blue, Baby blue
Maybe I’m better off without you
Because now my heart is baby blue
Title: Re: Baby Blue
Post by: rightly on September 14, 2021, 10:02:22 PM
These are lyrics without music
There's a different section for that