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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: SlavaB on September 05, 2021, 10:47:55 AM

Title: Obsessed
Post by: SlavaB on September 05, 2021, 10:47:55 AM

Hey folks,

Looking forward to present you for your feedbacks my "dirty minded" sound.
What do you think?
Had to share private link, due to a song not being released yet.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/41Kx4

Lyrics in song description.

Thank you.
Best Regards,
Slava B.

Title: Re: Obsessed
Post by: moraamarolaloba on September 05, 2021, 11:52:18 AM

Hola @SlavaB (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19895)

Nice to meet you.

The sound is strong, and adding your heavy voice ir is a bit scary ... something you were surely looking to achieve ... Good track. 🥶

Mora

Title: Re: Obsessed
Post by: rightly on September 05, 2021, 08:14:41 PM

yes i liked it too.
dirty lyrics, lots of fun
I do think a woman's voice would do well in there.
top guitar sound, well done

Title: Re: Obsessed
Post by: SlavaB on September 05, 2021, 08:50:32 PM

Thank you.

To be honest i would love to give it a go with female vocals on chorus. Maybe someone here would be interested? @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) ?

Title: Re: Obsessed
Post by: ChrisPrice on September 11, 2021, 12:09:25 AM

Yeah, love this! Big guitars and a gritty vocal. As rock n roll goes, it's kinda after my time - I'm old(!) - but this is great..I want to hear more... :)