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Title: love is making justice a game
Post by: rightly on September 03, 2021, 02:05:58 PM
well I've posted these lyrics before
I've been struggling with another production of this song lately

Any feedback or tips?



love is making justice a game
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I don't want to hurt anyone
I have to do something with this pain
I'm angry in a gentle way
smoke was playing in the air
I lit a candle with the greatest care
as quiet as not being there

everything is remembered in hate
and love is making justice a game

the truth defends any criminal
you don't have to see it that way too
but I could not find exception to this rule
today I'm giving more than I'll forget
the blood has dried the hurting hasn't started yet
I'm falling down a slide it's getting wet

everything is remembered in hate
and love is making justice a game
memories won't even go halfway
I'll curse you, still I'm glad that you came

and love is making justice a game
and love is making justice a game

and everything is remembered in hate


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Rightly
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