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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: ChrisPrice on August 30, 2021, 01:29:12 AM
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Sorry guys, I just posted this in the wrong place but I can't remove it. It's now posted in finished songs.
Take It Away
Going around the houses, for somethin’ I gotta say
Gotta be the right moment, so this could take all day
I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s take it away
All in the vibrations, I guess that it’s meant be
The missing piece in the jigsaw, if only we could see
I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s Take it away
I have a new song to sing, a new story to tell
It happens time and again, and we know it all too well
I got another page to write, another chapter on the way
All in a few simple words, gonna tell you, tell you right away
Going around the houses, for somethin’ I gotta say
Gotta be the right moment, so this could take all day
I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s take it away
Website (currently song 35): https://5ded45f1cd13e.site123.me/
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Hi
Great sound , Full & clear
It has a 70s feel in my ears & a professional Studio/Live sound
Great song to go Gigging
well done
subvibe
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Great production, vocals good too nice and clear easy to pick up the words without having to read the lyrics. I'd say this would probably sound even better as a live performance. enjoyed that one Chris.