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Title: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: PopTodd on May 23, 2020, 04:24:20 AM
This one is a fan favorite for some reason, but it's never really connected with ME.
I guess I understand why--it's catchy and upbeat. But, for some reason I feel insulted that so many people like this so much more than so many of my other songs with I think are better.
Anyway... Thoughts?
https://hoponpop.bandcamp.com/track/sheila-of-the-worms

Thanks
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: Unclenny on May 23, 2020, 08:22:22 PM
Got me grinning with this one.....great production!
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: PopTodd on May 23, 2020, 08:31:42 PM
Thanks!
And thanks for listening.
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: PaulAds on May 24, 2020, 12:52:10 AM
That’s a really bright catchy song...no wonder it got such a great response from the audience. I’d be more than happy if any song of mine was anything like as well received as that. Not that any of mine ever are  :D

I’d recommend enjoying it and being very pleased that you have even better songs up your sleeve.
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: PopTodd on May 24, 2020, 03:12:39 AM
That’s a really bright catchy song...no wonder it got such a great response from the audience. I’d be more than happy if any song of mine was anything like as well received as that. Not that any of mine ever are  :D

I’d recommend enjoying it and being very pleased that you have even better songs up your sleeve.

Thanks!
Admission: I recorded this "live" in the studio. The "audience" was completely made up. I just thought the singalong would work in this context. I guess I was right.
;)

(The applause was a sample and the singalong was me and a couple of friends doing the singalong thing over a few tracks)
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: cowparsleyman on May 24, 2020, 09:19:26 AM
@PopTodd (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19771) - diggit Todd, this kind of trickery is right up my alley...good catchy worm influenced song, i bet you would get a similar response were you gug with it.

Get touring man...
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: Unclenny on May 25, 2020, 04:54:12 PM
Admission: I recorded this "live" in the studio. The "audience" was completely made up. I just thought the singalong would work in this context. I guess I was right.
;)

(The applause was a sample and the singalong was me and a couple of friends doing the singalong thing over a few tracks)

Yeah....I knew. I did one like that myself some years ago but I did not pull it off as well as you did.  ;)

 8)
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: adamfarr on May 25, 2020, 06:01:39 PM
As a marketing person once said "Clients are mostly tacky". So it's probably right to keep doing what you think and not be driven solely by what they like...

It is a catchy and pleasing song though!
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: Cawproductions on May 25, 2020, 06:27:02 PM
Hi Poptod dude,

catchy AF, great live feel and love the harmonies dropping in and out.
Really like your guys stuff.

Some cheeky guitar work in there too,

Thumbs up here
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: IronKnee on May 25, 2020, 09:09:24 PM
Great energy.....has a great flow to it. The live performance is really cool.....sounds like a ton of fun...........
                                             -Tom
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: digger72 on May 26, 2020, 12:06:11 PM
Hi

Love that intro - sounds so real.
I reckon it would be a crowd favourite.
Guuiitaaar.

The energy is great.
The vocal and ad libs are a gem.

Digger
Title: Re: Sheila of the Worms
Post by: PopTodd on May 26, 2020, 03:18:30 PM
Hi

Love that intro - sounds so real.
I reckon it would be a crowd favourite.
Guuiitaaar.

The energy is great.
The vocal and ad libs are a gem.

Digger
Thanks, Digger.
I actually did record it "live" it was just in the studio. Played it as if we were in front of a crowd: playing and singing at the same time, and tried to imagine a crowd in front of us.
Almost.
The guitar solo WAS overdubbed as were the vocal harmonies (and the singalong of the crowd, of course), but that was it.

Thanks all of you for your comments. It was enlightening. I guess a crowd favorite is just a crowd favorite no matter what I think of it. I'd better get myself better acquainted with playing the damn thing then.