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Title: The night of time
Post by: moraamarolaloba on April 23, 2020, 11:56:34 AM

We never know anything although we think that yes, nothing makes sense, everything is fleeting, and sometimes one night or one day can be definitive

The night of time
changes the colors that surround us
making magic
with all the deep moments
running through us

being still together
being still together, together-

I take your hand
you understand and smile at me
I take refuge
in your brown eyes
and I keep them there

and I keep them there
there where I dream, I dream

I am afraid
you are afraid
which one will be the first
which one will stay here
both of us without each other

Title: Re: The night of time
Post by: pompeyjazz on April 23, 2020, 06:46:31 PM

Always fascinating listening to your songs @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) You come up with some very creative music that's for sure. I liked the wonderful ambience that you created. It's a very trippy vibe. I liked the sound FX that you used as well and some fabulous laid back lead guitar. A very enjoyable listen

Title: Re: The night of time
Post by: Jamie on April 25, 2020, 01:59:52 PM

@moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233)

Hi,   
     Love the chord progressions and beautifully crafted guitar interludes. Nice ambient feel to a very touching song. Love the line 'Both of us without each other',very powerful! Great video as usual and your vocal styling works nicely in your songs.

Cheers
Jamie

Title: Re: The night of time
Post by: MonnoDB on April 25, 2020, 09:42:13 PM

Beautiful and captivating @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) as always. Very atmospheric... Lovely guitar work as always - intriguing song..

K