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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Muso1070 on April 01, 2020, 12:52:11 PM
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Hey all just finished a new song here called 'It All Comes Down To Love'.
Lyrics added below and would appreciate any feedback.
Thanks
Lyrics
V1
The rising tide, on your mind
Take my hand lets go
Fill your cup, Dragonflies
It's a long way round this coast
C1
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...
V2
Spinning round, the world outside
You and me here feels right
The afterglow, a burning light
It slowly fades through time
C2
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...
Instrumental.
C3
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...
It all comes down to love...
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Your voice has a great tone but I get the feeling you are holding back a little bit ? If you open that voice it could be truly great. Guitar a little over processed for my liking but all in all very good work
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Hello, Yes a great voice, a nice music, maybe a bit repetitive, have a nice evening
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Hey thank you appreciate that and yes I can try to open up the voice :-)
Your voice has a great tone but I get the feeling you are holding back a little bit ? If you open that voice it could be truly great. Guitar a little over processed for my liking but all in all very good work
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Hello glad you like thanks.
I know what you mean but sometimes repetition works well, each song is different and some suit that kinda thing :-)
Hello, Yes a great voice, a nice music, maybe a bit repetitive, have a nice evening