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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: agentjoan on February 17, 2020, 01:00:38 AM

Title: untitled but maybe peace in a garden of war
Post by: agentjoan on February 17, 2020, 01:00:38 AM
Hello

the last verse is there a flow from the first two verses into it be greatful if you could tell me  8) thank you


peace in a garden of war
the smell of paradise we adore
train journey through the valley of hell
no god can tell flowers we smell

angel of doom dress to the nines
oh come on give me five
dreams and dreams past them on
dress yippee ki yay
dress to the nine

sweet angel sweet angel
go to sleep go to sleep
i will yes i will
see you in the morn