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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: maya sagi on January 19, 2020, 09:27:27 AM
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River swept by with the currents sank me to the ground
I learn to kick my feet to float and rediscover what I already found
broken bridges that are never to be rebuilt
a curvy road with no sign of human saul cause no one wants to be
at the place where ideas ran out
broken building made of desire
tumble down in smoke and fire
and wind blows just to reveal what used to be
the outline of my biggest trait
so i have nothing left to do but wander with myself
at the place where ideas ran out where did they go?
what its all about? I really dont know
its so empty and quiet dont know where to go
but ill just keep walk on by and look for this toughts
cause this is the place where ideas ran out
keeping myself busy by having a convrosation in my mind
reminding myself how i used to beleive that love is blind
that we dont pick who we love based on their image
but based on we are and we are alone with our feelings
but i cant be that girl again i have seen some stuff ive changed
but i still have the habit of always asking how and why
so heres a good one if im not that girl who am i
am i the girl who let achievements get into her head
am i the one who sings about sadness without being sad
am i the one who starts the fight just to feel the hit
am i the one who always finds something to bu hurt from even tho im landing on my feet
at the place where ideas ran out where did they go?
what its all about? I really dont know
its so empty and quiet dont know where to go
but ill just keep walk on by and look for this toughts
cause this is the place where ideas ran out
it feels lonley out in here the weather is hot but i am cold
and all the water from my hair touches the ground and truns to gold
to show me im one the right way to recuptre all this time
and as i take my hand to squeeze my hair i discover that the answer was always there
they say time can heal most anything but it dosent heal our scars
but it does have tha ability to make them who we are
at the place where ideas ran out where did they go?
what its all about? I really dont know
its so empty and quiet dont know where to go
but ill just keep walk on by and look for this toughts
cause this is the place where ideas ran out
i ralized everything can be rebuilt
so i go to the broken bridge next to me
and start to piece it toghter brick by brick hope by hope tought by tought goal by goal
hey sorry if my english is bad it's not my first language
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This is very interesting. I have a few suggestions.
River swept by with the strong currents sank pulled me to the ground down
I learned to kick my feet to float and rediscover what I already found
at the place where ideas ran out where did they go?
what its what's it all about? I really dont know
its so empty and quiet dont know where to go
but ill just keep walking on by and look for this toughts around
cause this is the place where ideas ran out
That's as far as I got, but may give you some ideas. I'm not sure I am accurately reflecting your thoughts with my suggestions, so take them or leave as works for you.
I noticed the rhythms of this are very loose and inconsistent, which would make it difficult (for me, anyway) to set to music. I'm sure someone could do it, though. And I'd be really curious to hear how it could be done.
Best of luck with it.
Vicki
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thanke you so much