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Title: I wanna see...
Post by: Misanthropist on January 17, 2020, 12:37:55 PM

Em     C    G    D
I wanna see

Em.                   D
everything on TV
I'm a soap guru
I know who did who
I wanna see
Reality TV
Everything mundane
Catapults to fame
I wanna see
Just you and me
Switching it off
To see the sky above
Em.  C.  G D
I wanna see

Revised


Em..C..G..D
I wanna see
I wanna see
I wanna see
I wanna see

I wanna see
Em. ............. D
everything on TV
I'm a soap guru
I know who did who
I wanna see
Reality TV
Everything mundane
Catapults to fame

I wanna see
I wanna see
I wanna see
I wanna see

I wanna see
Just you and me
Switching it off
To see the sky above


Em..C..G..D
I wanna see...
You switch it off
No you do it
No you
Just switch it off

Title: Re: I wanna see...
Post by: CaliaMoko on January 21, 2020, 08:16:52 PM

Interesting; I like the choice of topic. I noticed the chords which makes me wonder if you have a melody in mind? And style? I'd like to hear what you're thinking, musically.

Title: Re: I wanna see...
Post by: hardtwistmusic on January 22, 2020, 04:51:26 PM

I like this.  Satire about a truly important subject.  Just enough humor to make the satire stick.  Very well done imo.