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Title: I love you
Post by: Wicked Deeds on October 14, 2019, 06:38:07 PM
I love You

It's easy, don't you think,
to fall in love when love demands?
We're helpless to resist.
The future rests within our hands.

Everything I do, I do for you.
Our hearts expand then suddenly, it's true.

It's easy to ignore
The feelings that come knocking at your door.
It's foolish to be so.
I promise that I'll never let you go.


Everything I do, I do for you.
Our hearts expand then suddenly, it's true.

I love you.

To stare into a mirror,
to watch a true reflection of your thoughts; that can't be bought.
To share your every secret.
To tell her she's the one, is all it takes.
Release the brakes.


Everything I do, I do for you.
Our hearts expand then suddenly, it's true.

I love you.
I love you.

Written by Paul Vasey October 2019

Pour la Belle Mari.
Title: Re: I love you
Post by: Andreas on October 16, 2019, 01:32:42 PM
As always a masterpiece from you @Wicked Deeds (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19231)! The greatest question of them all is, what is love? how do we know she's the one? You manage to bring out all the emotion in what love truly is! Beautiful! :)
Title: Re: I love you
Post by: hardtwistmusic on October 17, 2019, 08:18:30 AM
Very nice.  Wonderfully short, sweet, simple and effective. 

Sang easily and dramatically without any effort at all to "find" a melody.  I think this is a cut above.