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Title: Do You Want Me
Post by: Modestmouse1965/ on August 28, 2019, 11:35:47 PM

https://soundcloud.com/user-335183051/do-u-want-me

I put this in Finished Songs as the idea is finished. I do realize the Lead guitar part is out of sinc but will be re-written for the re-record and still some work needed on it. Cheers.

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: shadowfax on August 29, 2019, 08:16:25 AM

One song every two weeks my friend...please read the guidelines :)

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: Modestmouse1965/ on August 29, 2019, 04:54:17 PM

Ok i missed that rule cheers.

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: Neil C on September 04, 2019, 09:58:16 AM

Steve, enjoying the live and energetic feel with the surfy garage rock guitars and vocals. And powerful chorus and cool ending too.
 :)
neil

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: digger72 on September 08, 2019, 11:04:21 AM

Hi Stevy,

Great energy.
Rocks like a good un.
Love how the bass drives the song along.

Reminds me a bit of Ned's Atomic Dustbin. Tracks like Kill Your Television.
Don't know if you're familiar with them?

The vocals are the real star for me. Great job.

Digger

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: Andreas on September 09, 2019, 11:55:41 AM

Good energy in the song and the bass and guitar drives the song to the end, and the vocals are really good :)

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: Modestmouse1965/ on September 09, 2019, 08:41:44 PM

Thanks Digger and Luke. I am in the middle of re-recording this with more attention on the lead guitar part. Haven't heard of Ned's Atomic Dustbin but will give them a listen. Cheers guys.

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: PaulyX on September 09, 2019, 10:10:40 PM

Very good.  (Can you post the lyrics?)  The main guitar riff is pretty addictive - slight hints of the Peter Gunn theme.  Nice walloping big chorus too and I really like the vocal treatment.  I'd definitely like to hear the re-record as it is already pretty smashing.  Great no nonsense ending too!

Title: Re: Do You Want Me
Post by: Modestmouse1965/ on September 10, 2019, 07:47:20 PM

Thanks PaulyX will get the lyrics up in the next couple of days. Glad you like it Got a few rockin raw songs like this but re-recording everything i have written in the past and also in the middle of writing new stuff but like us all its a juggling act with work, family and everything that goes with it. I would much rather have time than money.