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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Doodles on June 21, 2019, 07:41:25 PM

Title: Just an old mobile phone capture
Post by: Doodles on June 21, 2019, 07:41:25 PM

Hey,

I'm not really active in playing, writing or recording at the moment. But I just found this mobile phone recording of something I improvised with when I had five or six piano lessons a few years ago. A piano novice, playing on an old 1990s Yamaha and just managing to capture on my phone before dinner was ready... I know its not up to the high standards on this forum, but fancied sharing anyway. Man, was I hammering those keys.


Ben

Title: Re: Just an old mobile phone capture
Post by: PaulyX on June 22, 2019, 09:44:40 PM

Hi, you don't sound like a piano novice in this clip, not in terms of what you are coming up with anyway. Plenty of interesting little motifs in here. I'd like to hear it rerecorded properly, and built into a song. Keep the 'hey!' and 'what?' at the end though... nice way to finish it!