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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Girlinside on June 10, 2019, 11:15:50 AM
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Hi I’ve taken some old lyrics and I have a melody but I can’t record properly I wondered if someone would help me produce a song
Here’s my lyrics
Loneliness
Everybody sees me
but they don't see my mind
they think that my smile is a true one
and that I'm having the time of my life
Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own
Picture a prison cell
and the deepest well
that's where your find
the seeds of loneliness
Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own
Some say "how are you ? "
Oh if only they knew
but you just smile and nod
and hope to god you'll make it through
Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own
Fades
Surrounded by people
there as high as a steeple
but I might as well
be in a room of my own