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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Andyb on June 01, 2019, 05:35:23 PM

Title: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: Andyb on June 01, 2019, 05:35:23 PM

Breaking from my preferred genre of alt rock this is a little something I'm working on at the moment. Again most of noise is created on my bass and messing with some presets on my line6 amp. This is probably going to be the final song on my 2nd EP.
https://soundcloud.com/user-214476590/headspace-intro

Title: Re: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: cowparsleyman on June 02, 2019, 09:11:11 AM

Sounds cool and driving, to me the snare sounded a bit up in the mix..

Good luck with your EP

Title: Re: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: Doodles on June 21, 2019, 07:44:40 PM

Yes, I like it a lot. Builds lovely and sounds great - the main theme shines through; sounds like its just about to kick off. I'd like to hear where it goes next.

Title: Re: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: Girlinside on June 24, 2019, 10:13:30 AM

I like it has a human league feel to it

Title: Re: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: RealKevM on June 26, 2019, 10:52:20 PM

A change is as good as a rest as they say. Really good work mate, not very contemporary but it's sounding good all the same.

Title: Re: new song in the works... new direction?
Post by: Andyb on June 28, 2019, 12:53:11 PM

Quote from: Doodles on June 21, 2019, 07:44:40 PM

Yes, I like it a lot. Builds lovely and sounds great - the main theme shines through; sounds like its just about to kick off. I'd like to hear where it goes next.

It goes it to a very heavy rock piece at then end which is more my style ;)