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Title: The Devil Is Dead
Post by: Dogmax on May 12, 2019, 09:46:18 AM

I think nice I like this thank you forum  8)


The devil is dead

So heaven said

Do I believe

Outside my head


I walk around

In this world

On solid ground

Beneath my soul


The devil is dead

So heaven said

Do I believe

Outside my head


I stand at his grave

I bless his soul

Father come down

Take him home


I stand at his grave

I bless his soul

Father come down

Take your son home



The devil is dead

So heaven said

Do I believe

Outside my head


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Title: Re: The Devil Is Dead
Post by: Girlinside on May 16, 2019, 01:26:13 PM

Looking forward to hearing this pat

Title: Re: The Devil Is Dead
Post by: Dogmax on May 17, 2019, 09:05:08 PM

Thanks Katie, got a new mic today haven't try it out yet but still have the old one also pick up the guitar for the first time in a while, fingers are starting to flow with some lyrics which is a good sign, thanks again   8)