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Title: I Wrote You This Song
Post by: Younger Hills on May 01, 2019, 05:26:54 PM
This is probably my favorite song I have ever written, cause this is literally a piece of my heart put on paper :) The story shines through the lyrics, so I don't think there's any need to tell it. I have the melody line for the song ready and as soon as I have it produced I will upload it on the forum :)

Any feedback is much appreciated as always! :)

I Wrote You This Song

I wrote you this song
Cause I’m not good with words
A chance for me to express myself
And tell you how I really feel
It’s part of my story
I never seen much of the glory
While I live in Norway
And you’re on the other side

We got oceans that separate the two of us
Is the love that we have strong enough
To hold on to what we got
I will pray that it will ever last
But for now
I wrote you this song

I wrote you this song
For times when you feel alone
You need somebody to hold you close
I will be the one
I’ll sing you a melody
You are my ecstasy
I will love you endlessly
Through every up and down

We got oceans that separate the two of us
Is the love that we have strong enough
To hold on to what we got
I will pray that it will ever last
But for now
I wrote you this song
 
Title: Re: I Wrote You This Song
Post by: hardtwistmusic on May 03, 2019, 08:07:06 AM
Simple and powerful.  Very nice.